Storm The Hedgehog: From Beginning To End

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November 13th, 2011, 4:19 am

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polly2
Posted by polly2
November 13th, 2011, 9:57 am
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ok i agree with ad ,try to get a better backstory than that is way too overused but also try not to make him a mary-sue but balance him out without makng him too boring



G.B.A
Posted by G.B.A
November 17th, 2011, 5:20 pm
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Oh man, you're so original.



Smiffy SMF <3
Posted by Smiffy SMF <3
November 17th, 2011, 7:40 pm
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Followed G.B.A trolololol.

Nice narration idea, but the storyline has been done to death, and the sprites look like a Sonic clone.



Yeah :P

StormTheHedgehog
Posted by StormTheHedgehog
November 18th, 2011, 3:10 pm
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@Smiffy SMF <3: Well, Gerald Robotnik Decided to make another Clone to...Well...Not look so evil, Like How Shadow looks. My own kinda idea. :P So it pretty much is a sonic clone, Just recolored. So, Basically...Cheap recolor. XD



StormTheHedgehog
Posted by StormTheHedgehog
November 18th, 2011, 3:11 pm
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@G.B.A: Original? What'd you mean? I also changed the title and such. :P



Posted by amygirl09
November 18th, 2011, 6:25 pm
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@Advertisement: SOME things could change but hes doing very good for a first comic



Smiffy SMF <3
Posted by Smiffy SMF <3
November 18th, 2011, 6:58 pm
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Sorry man, but I'm gonna put this as nicely as possible.

The idea of an experiment creation/clone with a dark or bad past, has been done to death.

You should think of something original quick, or at least something to make this comic different from the others.



StormTheHedgehog
Posted by StormTheHedgehog
November 18th, 2011, 7:56 pm
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@G.B.A: Yeah...People do that all the time, Though. Like AlexaTheHedgehog. She made a comic called, "The New Amy Rose." It's got some character named Joey. He's a Hedgecoon (Hedgehog and Raccoon). Nobody really has a problem with fan characters befriending official characters. Well, Maybe you. I always do this. XD



StormTheHedgehog
Posted by StormTheHedgehog
November 18th, 2011, 7:58 pm
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@Smiffy SMF <3: Meh. Too late now. :3 Besides, The original story was called, "The Hedgehog with No past." That was done to death. Second, I was out of ideas, And I'm not stopping now. XD Tis story shall continue. But, You were being nice, but im not stopping this story. I've already got chapter 2 up and i started this story just 5 days ago. :P



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